My Poems- what do you think?

The first one is great. Is it about a priest or Christ. The second one was short but equally enjoyable. You have a gift. Keep writing. You can get a Journal of your work and submit it for publishing. Be very careful putting your writing online though. It is very easy for someone to cut and paste and p it on as there own. Get your work copyrighted. Then you can post all you want. Keep it up; you really have a wonderful gift.